Bobyoungbalt:

What do you think about this:
http://www.geocities.com/Vienna/Strasse/9282/sonnet.htm Do you think it works?

I have been brought up as a child listening to the poetic form of a Ghazal and the way this person has used it is not very effective at all (read "Murder!").

Also which in your opinion is the best form of the sonnet?