It is Fitgeraldian - almost. Strictly speaking, the rhymes whould be A, A, B, A.

It could more properly have read:-

Her bright blue eyes and tresses gold,
He looks upon, with gaze so bold;
Soft undulations ’neath her dress:
He waits to see her drapes unfold

Edited by Rhubarb Commando (02/27/13 12:11 PM)
Edit Reason: add rewritten masterpiece
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