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It's a little hard when you are writing poetry.
Do you mean things as "poetic license" and intend them
that way, or have you made a mistake?
Gentlely is Gently, but did you want 3 syllables?, for instance.
Third stanza: "No cry" - no crying? do not cry? etc.
Last edited by LukeJavan8; 07/18/10 03:40 PM.
----please, draw me a sheep----
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Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem"
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ott
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07/18/10 02:04 PM
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07/18/10 03:38 PM
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ott
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07/26/10 04:16 AM
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07/26/10 04:34 PM
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07/19/10 01:54 AM
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07/19/10 03:02 AM
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Avy
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07/19/10 03:25 AM
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ott
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07/26/10 04:53 AM
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Avy
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07/28/10 01:41 AM
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