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OP Any advices, especially about the language here as English would be very much appeciated.
Time to Say Goodbye--A Farewell
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Time to say goodbye,
smiling, or weeping,
slowly you pass me by,
remember the first time we meet,
in that time, some of you are raucous, some of you shy
Time to say goodbye,
in the air, your singing seems still lingering there,
do you know, your laughters are the best songs,
'cause it comes from a pure voice and heart,
and no bad guy dares to look into your eyes, and no one can tell you a lie.
Time to say goodbye,
But no cry
Do you know everybody parted will meet again,
we come from the same universe,
Have a big rejoice, blossoming and prosperous, be deadly happy,
before we reunite, returning everything when we die
Time to say goodbye.
Places that I've never seen or experienced with you.
Now I shall, I'll sail with you upon ships across the seas,
seas that exist no more,
it's time to say goodbye.
Time to Say Goodbye,
Do you know you have a pair of invisible wings,
That you can fly,
That you can touch the sky,
To the stars high up there in the night, gentlely say your hi.
Entire Thread Subject Posted By Posted Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" ott 07/18/10 02:04 PM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" LukeJavan8 07/18/10 03:38 PM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" ott 07/26/10 04:16 AM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" LukeJavan8 07/26/10 04:34 PM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" Avy 07/19/10 01:54 AM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" Jackie 07/19/10 03:02 AM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" Avy 07/19/10 03:25 AM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" ott 07/26/10 04:53 AM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" Avy 07/28/10 01:41 AM Re: Well, with no offense or spam, another longer "poem" Zed 08/03/10 07:00 AM
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