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Who is he/him?
The dramatis personae is the list of all the characters/actors such as appears at the beginning of a printed play. As a rather pretentious conceit, you can use it to mean all the characters themselves rather than the list of them, but I don't think you mean that every character's story is sad. Perhaps you meant to say "the main character" or "the protagonist"? That would at least give a clue as to who "he" is, otherwise there's no mention of who he can be.
You keep telling me what I'm going to feel and do when I see the movie. You don't know that. Tell me what you think about the movie - don't guess what I'm going to think.
You're trying to be very stylistic, but you start with two conversational and unnecessary direct sentences telling us that this is a movie review of a movie you've seen. If you're reviewing it, I'll assume you've seen it - don't bother telling me that you have. Start more like "I found the story of the trumpet player in "The Legend of 1900" to be very sad."
Last edited by Myridon; 07/31/07 08:16 PM.
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