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The action is picking up fast,
A fad, how long can is last?
As we pick up the pace,
Can we find us an ace,
Who’s efforts will leave aghast?
_________________________________________ of troy.

I believe that you meant the word 'whose';
In English I seldom do snooze -
Don't mean to critique,
It's rhyming I seek -
Just needed a topic to choose!
________________________________________ aniami

Seldom? Then sometimes you snooze.
Could be your problem is booze.
Oh yes you amuse,
"Who's" is not "whose",
But where is the "us" in aghast?
__________________________________________milum

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