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We must rehabilitate Sheen,
'Cause who else can we put on the screen?
But we must reinsure
That he'll act more mature,
If it takes a five-kilo ball-peen.
Sorry, I was responsible for those impossible words, so I'll try again:
POETIC-POINT
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A five-kilo ball-peen on the head of ole Sheen
tho' poetic may not be the point.
Does he need to be seen
on TV or big screen?
Or retired to the old actor's joint?
Drive-by/Drop-out
Last edited by LukeJavan8; 03/18/11 05:19 PM.
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Peter  "Sheenanigans" how topical I was having a go, (they were good words/so many word rhymed with both) I was nearly there, just having trouble with the last line..... this is where I got. The keepers at the zoo had to rehabilate A young chimp who needed a playmate Because of damage they had to reinsure When with an elephant he drank liqueur ...............................prostrate.
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Keep at it, no one cares if the words keep being used.
(Well, someone may care, but who cares?)
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THANKS, Luke....but really I was stuck and going nowhere. That last line...was never going to have any punch.
I was happy to see Peter's post. And it was so brilliant.
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OK - time to start a new one.
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I presume you mean for the next limerick????
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oh yes..but I'm not working on it yett.
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The victim of a recent drive-by
said, "Looks like I'm not going to thrive, guy.
The thug was a drop-out,
I think that a cop shout
will cause intellectual dive. Sigh."
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