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OP Never tried poem. Well, this is it, at least to me....
Fate knocing at the door.
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Thus Fate Knocks at the Door,
Dare you seize fate by the throat,
when it's certainly bending you, crushing you completely,
Dare you
Dare you follow your hear and soul,
When the rule rules
Dare you live in humility when sacrifice sacred
Dare you
Hey, I like it, and welcome aBoard! But I can't help but realize that if you'd left off the first word, your "notes" would match the opening of Beethoven's Fifth!
Of course it's a poem. Good work ott. Keep writing.
OP Yes, indeed some lines, especially the opening, orginate there. I like that music.
OP Thanks very much. I'm happy to hear that. I do write something that looks like poems occasionally, mostly for self-appreciation. Some advices to polish it would be appreciated very much, though.
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