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Two examples of others' work to introduce the idea, if you haven't yet come across this on the web recently:
One.
One.
Then two.
Three is next.
Five, of course, comes next.
Then eight. It's getting hard to do.
Math
Makes
My head
Quake with pain.
Writing a poem based
On Fibonacci does the same!
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Last edited by Faldage; 04/17/06 10:47 AM.
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The
bird
of time
has but a
short way to flutter,
And lo, the bird is on the wing.
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Birds (2)
So,
Dear
Milo
Talks of birds:
They strut to and fro,
Talking of Michelangelo…
Birds (3)
Fly,
High!
Wings droop:
Time’s sad loop,
Falling back to earth.
Yet just imagine flight’s rebirth.
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more on a bird theme:
Black
Red
Two tones
on one wing
Sweet spring! the blackbird's here,
Oh, rich rubies, amid the golden meadow grass.
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these
are
quite nice.
delightful!
birds and words as one,
together to describe life's shape.
formerly known as etaoin...
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Oops!
I
will post
my series post
elsewhere as it is
not quite relevant to this thread.
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Okay
Geez!
Two here
Three words next
Then five on this line
Stringing eight words together here is a pain!
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I
think
that you're
supposed to
worry about the
number of syllables, not the
number of words in the sentence like thirteen, okay?
formerly known as etaoin...
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A
Waning
Moon Peeks
into my room
Covering, like a base metal,
Weariness,leaving me sleeping in silver plated dreams.
--well the words follow the rule, (if not the syllables.)
i'll try again.. (since the last line has 13--
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