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BranShea #189064 02/02/10 10:46 AM
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Dear Coffeebean. Could this really be the end?
Entree: Dormice troops scare giants, goblins, gnasters, gerodonts, garminkels, gellephants, gurnamamoths & !!!!!!!!!!!!! hillsidetrolls!
So the troll groups retreat.
Bo and Mary pedal easily through pleasant farmlands.

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I just have been too busy to spend any time on this one. Didn't mean to imply by my silence that it was the end...

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Branny try you may but the most difficult thing in story writing is to end it.....
Bo and Mary pedal lazily through the pleasant farmlands.
They hear a noise, and says Bo, "Oh no, not again."

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the most difficult thing in story writing is to end it.....
I know, and much more so with this rophalic burden on top of it.
When I look at your line I think you forgot about that part.
To be honest, I got a bit fed up with counting those letters. I turned it into a circle story to leave it to my betters.

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Oh yes. I forgot to count the letters.

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Bo and Mary pedal easily through pleasant farmlands.
Up and down hills drowsy dormice daftly watch them pass by.
Suddenly several trolls whisk Mary off!
Bo ran some steps behind, lagging terribly.
Oh, I am the dude who'll arrive swiftly, striving intensely concerning deliverance!
..but wait! Troll whisks reach high. Mary was OK. Merrily seated comfy atop of big oak tree twigs.

In oak Mary pines: “Rescue quickly! Villains returning! Assistance requested speedily!”

Bo ran; Mary fell, aptly caught! Rascals trounced! Happiness, joyousness never-ending!

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Fish ladders may either weed out the wimps, or challenge the determined. Survival of the fittest.


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