Lovely!

It reads well aloud--great play of sound there. It should work very well musically. Especially:

"Have you ever seen deeper purple …
this in my wild wind fingers?
Could you have more fun with a pony or a goat?
Have you seen such flicking heels before,
Silver jig heels on the purple sky rim?
Come along always, come along now.?"

Thanks for posting it here.

WW