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It's a down-right rotten,
Low down dirty shame
Lord it's a down right rotten
low down dirty shame
The way that you treated me
Lord I know I'm not to blame

Jelly jelly jelly
Jelly stays on my mind
Jelly jelly jelly
Jelly stays on my mind
Jelly roll killed my pappy,
And drove my mama stone blind.

Jelly, Jelly -By Gregg Allman

I gets the bonus points and all your points, too! [guffaw-e]




#67623 05/03/2002 2:36 AM
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Well it must be jelly
'cause jam don't shake like that!
Well, it must be jelly
'cause jam don't shake like that!
Well keep swingin' that jelly
'Cause I'm sure a swingin' cat!

The Way She Walks Blues, Jelly Roll Morton

'nuff said...gimme dem points back!!!

The Only WO'N!

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I'm like a one-eyed cat,
peepin' in a sea-food store,
I'm like a one-eyed cat,
peepin' in a sea-food store;
I can look at you,
till you don't love me no more.

I believe you been doin' me wrong
and now I know,
I believe you been doin' me wrong
and now I know;
The more I work,
the faster my money goes.

I said Shake rattle and roll...etc

Bill Haley and the Comets, Shake Rattle and Roll


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I think SilkMuse just beat us, Connie, so we'll have to start over ...that's a pretty nifty combo, there SM (jellicle cats)!


Nashville Cats
The Lovin' Spoonful
- peak Billboard position # 8 in 1967
- Words and Music by John B. Sebastian


CHORUS
Nashville Cats, play clean as country water
Nashville Cats, play wild as mountain dew
Nashville Cats, been playin' since they's babies
Nashville Cats, get work before they're two

Well, there's thirteen hundred and fifty two
Guitar pickers in Nashville
And they can pick more notes than the number of ants
On a Tennessee anthill
Yeah, there's thirteen hundred and fifty two
Guitar cases in Nashville
And any one that unpacks 'is guitar could play
Twice as better than I will

Yeah, I was just thirteen, you might say I was a
Musical proverbial knee-high
When I heard a couple new-sounding tunes on the tubes
And they blasted me sky-high
And the record man said every one is a Yellow Sun
Record from Nashville
And up North there ain't nobody buys them
And I said, "But I will"

And it was
CHORUS

Well, there's sixteen thousand eight hundred 'n' twenty one
Mothers from Nashville
All their friends play music, and they ain't uptight
If one of the kids will
Because it's custom made for any mother's son
To be a guitar picker in Nashville
And I sure am glad I got a chance to say a word about
The music and the mothers from Nashville




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High and dry in the long hot day
Lost and lonely in every way
Got the flats all around me sky up above
I need a little water of love

I've been too long lonely and my heart feels pain
Crying out for some soothing rain
I believe I have taken enough
I need a little water of love

Water of love deep in the ground
No water here to be found
Some day baby when the river runs free
It'll carry that water of love to me

There's a bird up in a tree sitting up high
Waiting for me to die
If I don't get some water soon
I'll be dead and gone in the afternoon

Once I had a woman I could call my own
Once I had a woman now my woman is gone
Once there was a river now there's a stone
You know it's evil when you're living alone


Water of Love - Dire Straits



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We'd go down to the river
And into the river we'd dive
Oh down to the river we'd ride

The River, Bruce Springsteen "The Boss"

Triple Play!


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Left a good job in the city,
Working for The Man every night and day,
And I never lost one minute of sleeping,
Worrying 'bout the way things might have been.

Big wheel keep on turning,
Proud Mary keep on burning,
Rolling, rolling, rolling on the river.

"Proud Mary"
~~Creedence Clearwater Revival


#67630 05/04/2002 11:35 PM
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Dere's an ol' man called de Mississippi;
Dat's de ol' man dat I'd like to be!
What does he care if de world's got troubles?
What does he care if de land ain't free?
Ol' Man River,
Dat Ol' Man River
He mus' know sumpin' But don't say nuthin',
He jes' keeps rollin',
He keeps on rollin' along.
He don't plant taters,
He don't plant cotton,
An' dem dat plants 'em
Is soon forgotten,
But Ol' Man River,
He jes' keeps rollin' along
You an' me, we sweat an' strain,
Body all achin' an' racked wid pain -
Tote dat barge!
Lif' dat bale!
Git a little drunk,
An' you land in jail...
Ah gits weary
An' sick of tryin';
Ah'm tired of livin'
An skeered of dyin',
But Ol' Man River,
He jes' keeps rollin' along

Ol' Man River, Jerome Kern, from Showboat

© Jerome Kern 1927

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Couldn't you use a song that actually had some English in it WO'N?


She reminds me of the breath of summer sun
That breaks the cool daylight when morning has begun
Shine on sunshine; paint my life of grey
Shine on sunshine; warm my life always.
Better yet by far the best I ever saw;
The rain that breaks your heart
Won't bend our love for sure
So shine on sunshine, spread your light my way;
Shine on sunshine, weave your spell always.
Oh I get weary but she only has to smile
And all my fear is soon forgotten for a while.

"Shine on Sunshine"
~~Rod Argent


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starry, starry night
paint your palette blue and grey.
look out on a summer's day,
with eyes that know the darkness in my soul.
shadows on the hills
sketch the trees and the daffodils
catch the breeze and the winter chills
in colors on the snowy linen land

Vincent (Don McLean)

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Are the stars out tonight
I don't know if it's cloudy or bright
I only have eyes for you
The moon may be high
but I can't see a thing in the sky
I only have eyes for you.

I do know if I'm in a garden
Or on a crowdedavenue
you are here so am I
Maybe millions of people go by -
But they all disappear from view
Because I only have eyes for you.

I ONLY HAVE EYES FOR YOU ~ THE FLAMINGOS


*Certified* Scoring: - 86 of 100
Word matches (no articles) two = 10 points
Theme match - - (starry night.) = 30 "
Overall presentation and spelling = 40 "
Originality:
(for crowding "crowdedavenue") = 6 "


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And now the purple dusk of twilight time
Steals across the meadows of my heart
High up in the sky the little moon starts to
....b
...m
..i
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c
Always reminding me that we're apart
You wandered down the lane and far away
Leaving me a song that will not die
Love is now the stardust of yesterday
The music of the years gone by

Sometimes I wonder why I spend
a lonely night dreaming of a song
The melody haunts my reverie,
and I am once again with you
When our love was new
and each kiss an inspiration
But that was long ago,
now my consolation is in the stardust of a song.


Beside a garden wall,
when stars are bright,
you are in my arms
The nightingale tells his fairy tale
Of paradise where roses grew
Though I dream in vain,
in my heart it will remain
My stardust melody,
The memory of love's refrain

STARDUST
Lyrics by: Mitchell Parish
Music by: Hoagy Carmichael (Hoagland Howard C.)


*Certified* Scoring: - 136.5 of 100
Word matches (no articles) seven = 35 points
Bonus double word match (you are) = 20 points
Theme match - - (starry night.) = 30 points
Overall presentation and spelling = 40 "
Originality:
(for whiting out moon, but in bold and
for how climb climbs) = 12 points
Penality for using more than four lines (original rules, wherever they are) = - .5 point


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Oh yeah, Stardust, the song voted by the Songwriters Of America as the most perfect song written in the 20th century, oh yeah, that Stardust...

Heavenly shades of night are falling,
It's twilight time.
Out of the mist your voice is calling,
It's twilight time,
When purple colored curtains
Mark the end of the day.
I hear you my dear at twilight time.
Deepening shadows gather splendor
As day is done.
Fingers of night will soon surrender
The setting sun.
I count the moments, darling,
Till you're here with me,
Together at last at twilight time.

Here, in the after-glow of day,
We keep our __ beneath the blue.
___________ \___ rendez-vous
Here, in the sweet and same old way,
I f ll in love again as I did then.
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Deep in the dark your kiss will thrill me
Like days of old.
Lighting the spark of love that fills me
With dreams untold.
Each day I pray for evening just
To be with you,
Together at last at twilight time......
Together at last at twilight time.


TWILIGHT TIME - THE PLATTERS

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That's just too cool, Milo! I'd give you an extra .25 [read: a generous 1/4th of a point] in addition to the normal portion of originality points just for that maneuver!

Back-to-you regards,
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I hear you calling and you
don't have to call so loud
I see you falling and you don't
have to walk so proud
You can run all night but we
can take you where
You can shout out in anger
You can laugh like a fool
You can cry like an angel

"Cry Like an Angel"
~~S. Colvin - J. Leventhal


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I am Rosemary's granddaughter
The spitting image of my father
And when the day is done my momma's still my biggest fan
Sometimes I'm clueless and I'm clumsy
But I've got friends that love me
And they know just where I stand
It's all a part of me
And that's who I am

"Who I Am"
~~Jessica Andrews




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Who Do You Love ~ Bo Diddley
1956 A.D.


I walk 47 miles of barbed wire,
I use a cobra-snake for a necktie,
I got a brand new house on the roadside,
Made from rattlesnake hide,
I got a brand new chimney made on top,
Made out of a human skull,
Now come on take a walk with me, Arlene,
And tell me, who do you love?

Who do you love?
Who do you love?
Who do you love?
Who do you love?

I gota tombstone hand and a graveyard mind,
I'm just 22 and I don't mind dying.

Who do you love?
Who do you love?

I rode around the town, use a rattlesnake whip,
Take it easy Arlene, don't give me no lip,

Who do you love?
Who do you love?

Night was dark, but the sky was blue,
Down the alley, the ice-wagon flew,
Heard a bUMp, and somebody ScreeeameD,
You should have heard just what I seen.

Who do you love?
Who do you love?

Arlene took me by my hand,
And she said ooowee Bo, you know I understand.

Who do you love?
Who do you love?
Who do you love?
Who do you love?


****^^^^^^^^^^^^^//+\\^^^^^^^^^^^^^****




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Who do you love
Who do you love

Girl I know that you are torn between what was and what could be
I wanna know, gotta know, wanna know, gotta know
Who do you love
Who do you love

Oh yeah

"Who Do You Love?"
~~The Backstreet Boys




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