I think the poetic value is in the sentiment - and it has a whopper of a sentiment. You'll never find the sentiment "we don't need gods and religions to be decent people, just more kindness" in a Hallmark card.

I like it, just because it is daring.

Cheers,
Bryan

You are only wretched and unworthy if you choose to be.

Cheers,
Bryan

You are only wretched and unworthy if you choose to be.