as far as i know,
haiku have 3 lines of
5 syllables
7 syllables and
5 syllables.
there should also be a word to indicate the season.
if you translated the "white chrysanthemum" as
"shiroi kiku" it would be the final 5 syllables.
the first part could have many ways to be translated.
the question is, is this an english or japanese haiku?
let me try and find out if it's a well known haiku here.

there is also a haiku in english trend. i don't know much about this.