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Very nice, Rhuby, in a long=necked sort of way. The story could be true but it's a stretch.
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Many thanks, comrades
and the next two words are:-
SIXAIN - SKETCH
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A sixain’s a bit of a stretch
A limerick’s five lines just a sketch
But to turn a six line
Into a limerick is fine –
Just get one line lopped off by Jack Ketch!
Nothing like carrying a theme through, is there ...
RIBALD - RIPARIAN
The idiot also known as Capfka ...
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As Buff S says: "heh,heh"
----please, draw me a sheep----
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Getting a bit hung up n this theme, aren't we?
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I sit here on a riverbank to compose a ribald rhyme
The lush greenery distracts the riparian scene sublime
Stupid nature just grows
Mindlessly grows and grows
Then I remember that I am as well a part of the slime
UNDULATION - UNFOLD
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THE VOYEUR
Her bright blue eyes and golden tress,
Soft undulations ’neath her dress,
He looks upon, with gaze so bold -
And waits to see her drapes unfold
FOLIATE - FOOD
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... er, where's the limerick then, matey? You pulling some Scouser trick on us then?
The idiot also known as Capfka ...
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:)))) Sometimes a man gets poetical and it might not even as well be spring....
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Limerick is not a strict rule - and never has bin, culley. I have broken out into sixtrains and iambic pentameteters in the past, if the sentimeent of the topic demands it. This is the first time I've used a Khayyamic quatrain, but.
So there! :)-
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