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Said, Tour de France athlete
boosting his body with drugs was not offbeat
His 'win at all cost' odyssey
made him, a world prodigy
and the topic of many "tweet-a-tweet"
Last edited by Candy; 11/04/12 12:56 AM. Reason: with suggestions from AC & JJ
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 Good one, Candy, topical and nicely constructed. except... I like your "tweet-a-tweet" ending best. Because in the e-world the term "tete-a-tete" is as passe as "passe"  and... You forgot to leave us two new words.
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As it is close to 2:30 AM her time, and she probably won't
get back here until evening time, her time, maybe
if you all want to work on it take her poem and
take two words from it:
maybe
tete-a-tete and passe
Just a suggestion.
----please, draw me a sheep----
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His 'win at all cost' odyssey
made him, a world protege Did you mean "prodigy"?
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His 'win at all cost' odyssey
made him, a world protege Did you mean "prodigy"? Yes...I did. Prodigy and Protégé commonly confused words And while I'm there...I may as well tweak last line again 'cause then it will be perfect Thanks guys. Next words SNORKEL SNOW
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Maybeso, Luke, but doncha think we should wait for Candy? Wait. This discussion moves so fast that I don't know polite from being randy
Last edited by jenny jenny; 11/04/12 04:14 AM.
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It's all powder at forty below.
Take the chair lift or grab the rope tow.
Put your mask on your face
And your flippers in place.
It's a great day to snorkel in snow!
CHASER – CHECKER
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The forum software deleted the subject line from my limerick, refused to let me edit it, and won't allow me to reply to it, so I'm trying to post it by replying to Candy's post again.
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Maybeso, Luke, but doncha think we should wait for Candy? Wait. This discussion moves so fast that I don't know polite from being randy Whatever tickles your fancy,m'dear!
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Yeahbutt, Luke, my fancy has been gratified by my Andy. He's a stud and I'm a dud but our sweet Candy is dandy.
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