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Hmm...Indifferent Wind? Disinterested (Wind)? Maybe he's right--no title.
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I like your poem very much just the way it is now and I think your younger son and wife are right. It needs no title at all.
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OK - thanks again.
Here's the new title:
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So, when you talk about it will you call it the poem formerly known as Like to Sail?
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It's lovely, very evocative.
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I liked the poem, its imagery.
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