Callithump,

If I understand you correctly, this is meant to be a script, in other words, she will either memorize this or read from it. Is that correct? It makes a big difference for the responses you will receive. A resume is en entirely different thing.

I have another question: Are the parts you parenthesized [(Opening), (Personal and Family Information)] required by the university as parts of the presentation? If so, responders should not edit out these sections.