Your "article" is at
http://en.citizendium.org/wiki/CZ:Sandbox
(until someone else writes over it). You haven't saved it as a article yet.

If you are intending to post that text as a reply on a discussion page, that's fine. But if you're actually trying to make it an article, I don't think it fits Citizendium's definition of an article either in content or style. Encyclopedias generally aren't made up of personal opinions and anecdotes.