"I must be in a different circle." Zed shrugged. "I don't find it trite; in dialogue it sounds neater to me than said with a laugh."
Part of the problem is finding ways to differentiate the speakers, especially if there ore more than two, without too frequent use of A said, B said, A said, C said, Etc said.


edit: and how the heck did this topic pull up adds for bird flu protection?

Last edited by Zed; 07/09/07 07:40 PM.