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One of your executed commas took "the executions" along with it; tarred with too broad an eraser. That aside, I think it's a good argument for the Strunken Whitean comma before the conjunction in a list of three or more items. I'd go withQuote:The shock tactics, the arrests and repression, the executions, and the defeat of invasion attempts all combined to overawe any possible opposition and stunned the population into submission.
I don't know if the last two commas
"... attempts, all ..."
and
"... opposition, and stunned ..."
are good from a formal point of view, but I could see where they might lead to confusion in the mind of a non-native speaker, even one as fluent as you are, BranShea.
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