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The writing style: WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY too much detail that adds nothing to the story line.



I haven't read that one, Jackie, but maybe the problem is you're are looking for a storyline when there isn't meant to be one. A storyline, I mean. Maybe he's one of those fashionable post-modern writers and what you've got is more of a story-forking-path; or web, hypersphere, mobius-strip, tesseract type thingy.