I understood it for the most part. To me, the problm lies with his style, he thinks fast and talks about to many subjects at once within the same sentence. That's all it is, the reason you most likely had to re-read all that is all the comma's. You would read the first part and he would start referring to somthing else, then somthing else, then go back to what he was talking about. He should of talked about that main subject and then just take a little more writing to explain the other he wanted to say. He's just lazy.

~Ari I'm not that smart, but I might be right.