First of all, I just wanted to congratulate Jazz for his story idea - absolutely spiffing, well done! I also wanted to confess that I was so taken by the story that I've filched it. I have combinedd the parts posted by the time of this post, and uploaded them to the following URL
http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/maxq/Jazz's story.html

If you take a look, you will see that the only person credited is Jazz, as the progenitor. I wanted to see how it read as a whole, and how obvious the transitions were. If anyone feels that what I've done is inappropriate, please let me know, it's the work of two seconds to remove it.