Followed is one letter written by me. For it's written out of my own mind and I can be a little more freely about how to word, I felt a little less clumsy with it than with one that's dictated in Chinese while having to be translated into English without changing its wording.
But that's only what I think. I don't know how a native English speaker feel and I would like you to comment on these letters and point out where I should improve and where it makes you confused.
Thanks,
Calli.
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K.C.,
Hello. How are you? This is WAN Yuti, who met you and talked with you about something concerning culture exchange projects a few days ago in Peking University, China.
Attached is a simple introduction (in Chinese) to the project we talked about that's intended for the market outside mainland China. Please have a brief idea about it and consider whether there is demand in South-east Asia as well as Taiwan or even whether there is possible opportunities for cooperation or marketing. There is no detailed expense calculations. You can click the link http://www.sce.***.edu.cn/recruit_detail.jsp?seq=4668&boardid=300 to refer to the price we fixed for China. We would like to hear advices on that.
At the above link the publicized version of the recruitment information for the aforesaid item can be found. On this page you can also find the summer camp project we mentioned that day together with the before-mentioned item. It originally is designed to target domestic market in China and might not suit the market outside China(or might suit the market in Taiwan?). You can find a third item about HSK, a training program for those who want to sit for Chinese language aptitude test. I don't know whether international students outside China might be interested in it or not.
Please take your time and feel free to contact us if you have any questions or suggestions.
Thanks and we look forward to your reply.
Best regards,
WAN Yuti
http://www.***.com.cn
Office Phone: 86-10-517300**
Home Phone: 86-10-625700**
Mobile: 86-10-1352002****
Email: training@***.com.cn wanyuti@**.com
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发件人: training [mailto:training@*]
发送时间: 2005年5月16日 18:27
收件人: *@***.org.cn; training;
主题: Fw: 中国语言及文化培训
I抦 learning English. If u find anywhere I can improve my composition, Pls do let me know. Bow.