Yeah I'm with you Musick, if Plutarch wants to write the part that is traditionally supplied by the ladies he should at least give lip service to the rules and connect Maverick's 5/7/5 with a pair of 7 syllable lines that have some continuity of meaning but which also sets up a directional change.

Go ahead and finish this round if you want to, Musick and then we'll get an authentic woman to do the 7/7 trick.