I would be an eccentric poet indeed if I thought anyone could improve on my own poetry, themilum.

Besides which, "reality" is too omnipresent to be the stuff of poetry, at least the stuff of the kind of stuff which appeals to me.

Poetry should take us away, if only for a moment, or give us a glimpse of some other "reality", wouldn't you say?

In any case, I thank you for telling us the tale of the blind wolf and her two pups. It got me to thinking about the poetry in your own tale.