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Just picking a nit here : Didn't awful originally mean full of awe? Commanding profound respect. Reverential awe. OED still lists it as a seond meaning (how the mighty do fall!)
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When using 'awefull' a few posts up, I was thinking along the 'shock and awe' line.
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Please believe I didn't mean to offend. I just noted the spelling in a sort of visual double-take. Should sit on my hands more. Sorry.
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didn't mean to offend
S'okay! Never thought you did. But word play like that is always tricky and I often find that I have written something quite obscure that I blithely thought was transparent!
In fact a visual double-take was what I was trying for - some of the imagery in the poem is intended, rather like that in Dantés Inferno, to give feelings of fear and terror in an old fashioned way. The writing brings pictures to mind that would have to be produced as steel engravings; thinking about it, I believe the famous Doré illustrations to Danté are steel engravings - I'll have to check - and they convey the dark mood of the work.
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I think that gonoldothrond said it all.
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