RE:
Alongside the ship careened by the tropical shore, a group of pirates buried beneath a coconut tree.

I think it's very descriptive of a small nautical graveyard; (Comma included; was implied):

Alongside the ship careened by the tropical shore, (was) a group of pirates, buried beneath a coconut tree.

Otherwise, it's gibberish, lacks the requisite D.O.





Ron.

Ron.