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#199691 05/07/11 01:12 PM
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I work hard at tolerating singular they, I really do. but if you're going to use it, ought you not try to be internally consistent with, like, objects?! here's a jarring (to me) example of a failure to do so:

..each was expected to present a short report on highlights in their respective bureaus[!sic!] since last weeks meeting. - John Lescroart, The Second Chair

I can imagine this to be the work of a lowly copy editor, but still. (if this has left you scratching your head, try substituting an actual singular pronoun such as his or her for their in the example.)

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I would have said "of their", not "in their".

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I work hard at tolerating singular they, I really do. but

Oh, pshaw! As a feature of English grammar, from some of our best writers, for over six centuries, it should not only be tolerated but taught in grammar schools.

[!sic!]

What abomination is this? Does this mean "not sic!" or "not sic not"?

Anyway, I see what's going on, and it's interesting. Obviously, their still retains a trace of plurality, and therefore, the plural on bureaus (erm, bureaux) seems right. If I penned the sentence, though, I'd probably go with the singular bureau as well as the singular they.


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Quote:
[!sic!]

What abomination is this? Does this mean "not sic!" or "not sic not"?


merely emPHAsizing that the atrocity was in the original. oh, but you knew that.
-joe (I get it) friday

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..each was expected to present a short report on highlights in their respective bureaus[!sic!] since last weeks meeting. - John Lescroart, The Second Chair

Could be they are super employees / managers who all have more than one bureau each.

I'm really curious what could be a highlight in or of any bureau.

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it's San Francisco police bureaus - one Lieutenant heads each (at least in this author's conceit).

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Oh, that explains it then.

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Funny, but the tsuwm "corrected" version sounds wrong to me and the printed version does not. Well, you know what they say: de gustibus nihil nisi bonum, or something like that.

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de gustibus non est disputandum???


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de gustibus non est disputandum?

Faldo was playing with two Latin sayings: (1) de gustibus nihil nisi bonum (dicendum est) "(Say) nothing about the dead, unless it's good", and (2) de gustibus non est disputandum "There's not arguing about tastes".


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