Wordsmith.org: the magic of words

Wordsmith Talk

About Us | What's New | Search | Site Map | Contact Us  

Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
#180588 11/27/08 02:50 AM
Joined: Mar 2000
Posts: 11,613
Jackie Offline OP
Carpal Tunnel
OP Offline
Carpal Tunnel
Joined: Mar 2000
Posts: 11,613
"The federal jury ... rejected three other felony counts of accessing computers without authorization to inflict emotional harm."

Uh--think maybe that could have been written a bit better? (This was from an on-line news article.)

Jackie #180590 11/27/08 04:37 AM
Joined: Feb 2008
Posts: 1,067
old hand
Offline
old hand
Joined: Feb 2008
Posts: 1,067
...you mean you can apply for authorization to inflict emotional harm?? Where do I sign? confused

Jackie #180603 11/27/08 02:06 PM
Joined: Dec 2000
Posts: 13,803
Carpal Tunnel
Offline
Carpal Tunnel
Joined: Dec 2000
Posts: 13,803
Originally Posted By: Jackie
"The federal jury ... rejected three other felony counts of accessing computers without authorization to inflict emotional harm."

Uh--think maybe that could have been written a bit better? (This was from an on-line news article.)



Umm... Lessee. You want some way of saying that it was the accessing of the computer that was unauthorized without implying that the intent to inflict emotional harm was open to being authorized. Beyond common sense, that is. And maybe even keeping it to one sentence. And not coming off all awkward and stuff. Or are you maybe suggesting that the intent of the federal jury's rejection of the three other felony counts was to inflict emotional harm?

Faldage #180622 11/29/08 01:50 AM
Joined: Mar 2000
Posts: 11,613
Jackie Offline OP
Carpal Tunnel
OP Offline
Carpal Tunnel
Joined: Mar 2000
Posts: 11,613
Move over, Pookie, I'm cutting in line.

Jackie #181603 01/09/09 06:43 PM
Joined: Jun 2008
Posts: 9,918
Likes: 2
Carpal Tunnel
Offline
Carpal Tunnel
Joined: Jun 2008
Posts: 9,918
Likes: 2


speaking of court things:
Why is it, and is it OK,
for newscasters to use the term pleaded
e.g. "he pleaded innocent".
Is it OK? I thought the past was pled
or are now both acceptable?


----please, draw me a sheep----
LukeJavan8 #181608 01/10/09 02:49 AM
Joined: Dec 2000
Posts: 13,803
Carpal Tunnel
Offline
Carpal Tunnel
Joined: Dec 2000
Posts: 13,803
Random House Unabridged, 1966 and AHD4 both accept pleaded and pled. As an added bonus, RHU also accepts plead (pronounced /pled/) as the past tense.

You'd be on safer grounds objecting to the "innocent" part. It's either "guilty" or "not guilty."


Moderated by  Jackie 

Link Copied to Clipboard
Forum Statistics
Forums16
Topics13,913
Posts229,344
Members9,182
Most Online3,341
Dec 9th, 2011
Newest Members
Ineffable, ddrinnan, TRIALNERRA, befuddledmind, KILL_YOUR_SUV
9,182 Registered Users
Who's Online Now
0 members (), 782 guests, and 2 robots.
Key: Admin, Global Mod, Mod
Top Posters(30 Days)
Top Posters
wwh 13,858
Faldage 13,803
Jackie 11,613
wofahulicodoc 10,546
tsuwm 10,542
LukeJavan8 9,918
AnnaStrophic 6,511
Wordwind 6,296
of troy 5,400
Disclaimer: Wordsmith.org is not responsible for views expressed on this site. Use of this forum is at your own risk and liability - you agree to hold Wordsmith.org and its associates harmless as a condition of using it.

Home | Today's Word | Yesterday's Word | Subscribe | FAQ | Archives | Search | Feedback
Wordsmith Talk | Wordsmith Chat

© 1994-2024 Wordsmith

Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5