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Two examples of others' work to introduce the idea, if you haven't yet come across this on the web recently: One. One. Then two. Three is next. Five, of course, comes next. Then eight. It's getting hard to do.
Math Makes My head Quake with pain. Writing a poem based On Fibonacci does the same!
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The bird of time has but a short way to flutter, And lo, the bird is on the wing.
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Birds (2)
So, Dear Milo Talks of birds: They strut to and fro, Talking of Michelangelo…
Birds (3)
Fly, High! Wings droop: Time’s sad loop, Falling back to earth. Yet just imagine flight’s rebirth.
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more on a bird theme:
Black Red Two tones on one wing Sweet spring! the blackbird's here, Oh, rich rubies, amid the golden meadow grass.
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these are quite nice. delightful! birds and words as one, together to describe life's shape.
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Oops! I will post my series post elsewhere as it is not quite relevant to this thread.
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Okay Geez! Two here Three words next Then five on this line Stringing eight words together here is a pain!
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I think that you're supposed to worry about the number of syllables, not the number of words in the sentence like thirteen, okay?
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A Waning Moon Peeks into my room Covering, like a base metal, Weariness,leaving me sleeping in silver plated dreams.
--well the words follow the rule, (if not the syllables.) i'll try again.. (since the last line has 13--
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