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#139363 02/13/05 08:50 PM
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I sensei bin tanka'd into this.


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Blast! This Howz-bouta is getting out of hand.

Ok, I'll drop my rock so everyone can continue with our
ill-started Tanka with Musick's 5/7/5 needing sevens...

Pebble in the stream
Lava flowing on the hill
Our words change slowly

Frothing surf atop the waves
The tide comes and the tide goes

Words are given thoughts
which may melt old rocks and clog
streams which feed the seas



#139365 02/13/05 09:15 PM
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Pebble in the stream
Lava flowing on the hill
Our words change slowly

Frothing surf atop the waves
The tide comes and the tide goes

Words are given thoughts
which may melt old rocks and clog
streams which feed the seas

Seven seas brim too slowly
Attentuate too swiftly


#139366 02/13/05 10:56 PM
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Pebble in the stream
Lava flowing on the hill
Our words change slowly

Frothing surf atop the waves
The tide comes and the tide goes

Words are given thoughts
which may melt old rocks and clog
streams which feed the seas

Seven seas brim too slowly
Attentuate too swiftly

Sea eels verb each noun                seven
So what if fish tell lies, Yang? swiftly
Seals live on white lies, Yen. slowly


#139367 02/15/05 12:01 AM
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Come on then Milo, help us benighted mortals out, here ~ what does this mean?!


#139368 02/15/05 01:26 AM
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What does it mean? What does it mean? You tell me what Plutarch's joining sevens meant, then I'll gladly tell you exactly to the ninth nuance, what my tanka meant.
I told you more than once that we needed a woman to supply the connecting sevens; when men write it their egos get in the way and it doesn't make any sense.

Listen, I made those three loosely related anagrams using three of Plutrachs words just to move the game along. So shoot me.

Why don't you go out and find an extension of "Attentuate too swiftly.





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Pebble in the stream
Lava flowing on the hill
Our words change slowly

Frothing surf atop the waves
The tide comes and the tide goes

Words are given thoughts
which may melt old rocks and clog
streams which feed the seas

Seven seas brim too slowly
Attentuate too swiftly

Sea eels verb each noun seven
So what if fish tell lies, Yang? swiftly
Seals live on white lies, Yen. slowly

Slippery tongues obfuscate
The truth and lie in all hues



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Pebble in the stream
Lava flowing on the hill
Our words change slowly

Frothing surf atop the waves
The tide comes and the tide goes

Words are given thoughts
which may melt old rocks and clog
streams which feed the seas

Seven seas brim too slowly
Attentuate too swiftly

Sea eels verb each noun seven
So what if fish tell lies, Yang? swiftly
Seals live on white lies, Yen. slowly

Slippery tongues obfuscate
The truth and lie in all hues


Pure truth absent hue
Lie enfolds germ - tainted truth
Waves pound shore, cleanse truth.



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Pebble in the stream
Lava flowing on the hill
Our words change slowly

Frothing surf atop the waves
The tide comes and the tide goes

Words are given thoughts
which may melt old rocks and clog
streams which feed the seas

Seven seas brim too slowly
Attentuate too swiftly

Sea eels verb each noun seven
So what if fish tell lies, Yang? swiftly
Seals live on white lies, Yen. slowly

Slippery tongues obfuscate
The truth and lie in all hues

Pure truth absent hue
Lie enfolds germ - tainted truth
Waves pound shore, cleanse truth.


Truth's diamond never corrodes
But refracts to each their hue.



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Pebble in the stream
Lava flowing on the hill
Our words change slowly

Frothing surf atop the waves
The tide comes and the tide goes

Words are given thoughts
which may melt old rocks and clog
streams which feed the seas

Seven seas brim too slowly
Attentuate too swiftly

Sea eels verb each noun seven
So what if fish tell lies, Yang? swiftly
Seals live on white lies, Yen. slowly

Slippery tongues obfuscate
The truth and lie in all hues

Pure truth absent hue
Lie enfolds germ - tainted truth
Waves pound shore, cleanse truth.

Truth's diamond never corrodes
But refracts to each their hue.


Flood cedes, growth anew
Diamond of truth commands view
Wisdom pores, like dew.



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