Hi,

Can anyone help review a dissertation's abstract that's attached below? It's written in both our native language and English. We have no problem with the former, but not confident our English version.

I would appreciate it very much if you can kindly give some advices. \:\)

Calli


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ABSTRACT

Starting from 1990s onwards, a revolutionary transformation from the era of industrial economy to the era of knowledge economy, occurs in our society, when the enterprises experience a great change of the context of times and the environment of competition. In the 21st century, this competition will become increasingly fierce.
Chinese enterprises should learn from foreign experience in order to use the methodology of SCM or Supply Chain Management. Basing on their own reality and aiming at channels management, they can realize this by outsoucing and carry it out by first putting it into place then keeping it optimized.
Other than SCM, which has been widely used in enterprises, SCMS or Supply Chain Management Services, which is still in the phase of exploration and research, is a brand new theory. New theories are developing while the outside world is renovating. A business must utilize more and better theories to operate in order to keep itself to foot at this competive society. The ideas of SCMS are evolving together with a variety of new thoughts of marketing and management. All of these theories and thoughts will keep our world advancing. SCMS will become the trend in a certain period of time. It’s an important issue for us to deal with. It involves logistics, transportation, quality control, enterprise performance assessment, information systems and technology,.
In this paper, keeping in mind the SCM in a business environment, we analyzed the problems and solutions of current SCM and its trend in the future. We delved into a few aspects of SCMS. By using the SCMS theory, we analyzed the deterministic problems, such as logistics, transportation, quality control & supervision system, and information systems technology, as well as indeterministic issues, such as manufacture flexibility and service deviation, so as to provide a theoretical guidance for the business operation.

Keywords:Supply Chain Management, Quality Control, Information Systems, Supply Chain Management Services


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