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Is the sentence fine? #211699
07/11/13 01:44 PM 07/11/13 01:44 PM
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Posts: 41 Lionel Koh OP
As a result of heavy traffic, his flight had left by the time he got to airport.
Is the sentence fine?
Re: Is the sentence fine? [Re: Lionel Koh] #211708
07/12/13 12:22 AM 07/12/13 12:22 AM
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Posts: 13,803 Faldage
It makes it sound like his flight leaving on time was a result of the heavy traffic. Better you should say something like "As a result of heavy traffic he missed his flight, which left on schedule."
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