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#211699 - 07/11/13 01:44 PM Is the sentence fine? Joined: Sep 2012
Posts: 41 Lionel Koh
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As a result of heavy traffic, his flight had left by the time he got to airport.
Is the sentence fine?
#211708 - 07/12/13 12:22 AM Re: Is the sentence fine? [Re: Lionel Koh] Joined: Dec 2000
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It makes it sound like his flight leaving on time was a result of the heavy traffic. Better you should say something like "As a result of heavy traffic he missed his flight, which left on schedule."
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