I'm looking for some real, non-sycophantic, genuinely critical feedback from those of you who did follow what I wrote. I'm looking at publication, and any suggestions, hints, snipes, grumbles, suggestions or comments (preferably not personal, but aimed at the journal) will be very, very welcome.

Thanks, all!

There're misspellings and some really fractured sentences in there. AnnaS and I have them all printed out and would be only too*happy to proof and copyedit them.

*Thanks, E. (hell of an advert for a proofreader, but then that's why we're a team)

Have we discussed percentages and residuals yet?

percentages and residuals

Good point (my agent)