Omit needless words - 11/05/07 12:17 PM
"Write with nouns and verbs, not with adjectives and adverbs. The
adjective hasn't been built that can pull a weak or inaccurate noun out of a tight place."
Or, the edited version:
"Write with nouns and verbs, with adjectives and adverbs. The
adjective has been built that can pull a noun out of a place."
adjective hasn't been built that can pull a weak or inaccurate noun out of a tight place."
Or, the edited version:
"Write with nouns and verbs, with adjectives and adverbs. The
adjective has been built that can pull a noun out of a place."