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#212687 - 10/02/13 01:30 AM This [b]transforming / transformation[/b] of ...
He was a notorious gangster. After his marriage, he dissociated himself from the gang. This sudden transforming / transformation of identity surprised all his close friends and the police.
Can either bold word be used? And does "of identity" fit in the sentence?
#212692 - 10/02/13 08:48 PM Re: This [b]transforming / transformation[/b] of ... [Re: Lionel Koh]
Could someone please help? Thanks.
#212695 - 10/03/13 07:06 AM Re: This [b]transforming / transformation[/b] of ... [Re: Lionel Koh]
I'd go with transformation. Transforming would refer to the process of changing his identity, transformation to the result.
#212734 - 10/06/13 02:14 PM Re: This [b]transforming / transformation[/b] of ... [Re: Lionel Koh]
Loc: Southern CA
Faldage is right. And "of identity" is tautological---excess baggage, already implied.
Near the end of that sentence is a rare instance when "as well as" might work better than "and." It emphasis the object and sets up the punchline.
Edited by Hallyx (10/06/13 02:17 PM)
#212738 - 10/06/13 07:17 PM Re: This [b]transforming / transformation[/b] of ... [Re: Lionel Koh]
I'd leave "of identity" in. It helps clarify just what the transformation was.
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