#205079 - 03/09/12 05:19 AM
Re: Two things
[Re: jenny jenny]
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Pooh-Bah
Registered: 09/21/10
Posts: 1705
Loc: down under
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My brother is a Republican.....
Good one jenny jenny and nice to see you back. I hope this is not just a cameo appearance. And Peter...your little rhyme has a taste of The Little Shop of Horrors LOL
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#205085 - 03/09/12 07:17 AM
See, J^2? There's at least two!
[Re: Tromboniator]
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Carpal Tunnel
Registered: 08/06/01
Posts: 3850
Loc: Worcester, MA
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My brother built a grocery store
To annihilate our mother.
The building was a carnivore,
'T'would eat what it could smother.
He rigged the soap aisle to collapse,
But Mom shopped in another.
A quirk of fate it was, perhaps:
An aisle ate my brother.
edit: Nice work, Jenny. Also nice work, Peter - I was trying to do something along those lines also but couldn't bring it together.
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#205088 - 03/09/12 09:28 AM
Re: See, J^2? There's at least two!
[Re: wofahulicodoc]
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Carpal Tunnel
Registered: 06/23/08
Posts: 5373
Loc: Land of the Flat Water
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Ditto to Wofa, nice work.
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#205090 - 03/09/12 10:54 AM
Re: Two things
[Re: Tromboniator]
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veteran
Registered: 01/23/02
Posts: 1523
Loc: Virginia, USA
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My brother built a grocery store
To annihilate our mother.
The building was a carnivore,
'T'would eat what it could smother.
He rigged the soap aisle to collapse,
But Mom shopped in another.
A quirk of fate it was, perhaps:
An aisle ate my brother.
This is *really* nice, but the meter in the last line seems off to me. You should send it to Reader's Digest or maybe even New Yorker.
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#205094 - 03/09/12 04:38 PM
Re: Two things
[Re: TheFallibleFiend]
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Carpal Tunnel
Registered: 08/06/01
Posts: 3850
Loc: Worcester, MA
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...the meter in the last line seems off to me. It's a regional variation, I suspect. Do you pronounce "aisle" as one syllable (I'LL) or two (EYE-ull) ?
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#205106 - 03/10/12 08:51 AM
Re: Civil request
[Re: Tromboniator]
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old hand
Registered: 11/13/11
Posts: 1039
Loc: Lancaster, UK
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Now, that's really clever, Peter!
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#205107 - 03/10/12 09:05 AM
A CAUTIONARY TALE!
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old hand
Registered: 11/13/11
Posts: 1039
Loc: Lancaster, UK
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Wild fungi: Lord Algernon sought ‘em;
They led to his early post-mortem
From a fungus most potent, ate
By the great potentate.
Mushrooms are best if you’ve bought ‘em!
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