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Owlbow #188595 01/04/10 12:04 AM
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Hmm...Indifferent Wind? Disinterested (Wind)? Maybe he's right--no title.

Owlbow #188596 01/04/10 05:26 AM
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I like your poem very much just the way it is now and I think your younger son and wife are right. It needs no title at all.

BranShea #188599 01/04/10 08:02 PM
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OK - thanks again.

Here's the new title:

Owlbow #188601 01/04/10 10:12 PM
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So, when you talk about it will you call it the poem formerly known as Like to Sail?

Faldage #188603 01/05/10 02:55 AM
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He IS a prince...

Jackie #188604 01/05/10 04:01 AM
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It's lovely, very evocative.

Zed #188871 01/22/10 01:28 AM
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I liked the poem, its imagery.

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